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Natay is a former member of Claw a top rank group in the city he lift 3 years ago why he liftthe group nobody knows why he lift but he did now he's on a mission to save his little Bro and his little Sis and nothing will stop him from doing that nothing his mato never give up

Charden F. wrote:

Charden is a nice personbut oleny of you treat him right but when you make him mad it's all over but lets get started charden grow up in a small town yes he was poor and did not have much his parent's were all ways gone and so he had to make do with what he had at the hose but one day somthing happend to him while he was going to the store he saw alight and little did he know that light would change his life so being as he was he stoped and went to look at what it was and out of the blue a glove stuck to his hand and it would not come off so charden tryed everything to take it off but it was stuck there right on his hand ao there he was a kid with a glove on his hand so 7 years later when he tarnd 15 he still had no idea what to do with the white glove so one day when he was walking a big big thing came out and tryed to kill him you relly dont want to know who or what attecd him just know that it was not pritty then somthing happend. The End

GAH. No sentences at all! RAWR.

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Charden is a nice person, but only of you treat him right. You make him mad, it's all over. Let's get started.
Charden grew up in a small town. He was poor and did not have much. His parents were always gone, so he had to make do with what he had at the house. One day somthing happened to him while he was going to the store. He saw a light and little did he know, that light would change his life forever. So, being as he was, Charden stopped and went to look at what the light could possibly be, and out of the blue a glove stuck to his hand and it would not come off. Charden tried everything to get it off, but it was stuck there right on his hand. He was now a kid with a glove stuck to his hand.
7 years later, when he turned 15, he still had no idea what to do with the white glove. One day when he was walking a huge thing came and tryed to kill him. You really dont want to know who or what attacked him. Just know that it was not pretty.
Then, something happened......

The End

I'm sure Mayumi's like the only person on this site nice enough to do this, so I'll thank her on behalf of the Nightmare. Now it makes a sliver of sense =p.

Too bad he's gonna die. We all know who this is.

Lucius Blackthorn wrote:

I'm sure Mayumi's like the only person on this site nice enough to do this, so I'll thank her on behalf of the Nightmare. Now it makes a sliver of sense =p.

Thank you Lu. ^^

And Also, don't be too harsh. As long as he learns from his mistake, he'll be fine.

This guy again?
May-chan, your too nice.

*Just growls*

He will be fine as long as he does not break our rules. If it comes to that then all hell will break loose. Otherwise that, he will get his chance so let him be.

i lost all interest in reading this after i noticed like 3 grammatical errors in the first 5 words...and now after reading these responses, i'm kinda glad i didn't waste time reading it XD

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i lost all interest in reading this after i noticed like 3 grammatical errors in the first 5 words...and now after reading these responses, i'm kinda glad i didn't waste time reading it XD

Damn...your heartless =P

sometimes XP. too bad he changed it, now i can't talk about it the same way =(

Oh....that's awful...let's find someone else to pick on now? lmao

and away we go! to find another failure XD

Grr...there doesn't seem to be any....awww >.<

*Cries* CURSE EVERYONE ELSE FOR BEING OF AT LEAST AVERAGE INTELLIGENCE!!!!! >=O

what now Bro's and Sis's how you like that